How to become a game journalist
Needless to say, if you want to write about games, then at least you should have some experience in this area. Otherwise, hardened gamers will laugh at you. If you still play, then everything only comes up against the text and your ability to express it.
Remember that the article has an introduction, main part and conclusion. And thoughts, like energy in physics, should not arise from nowhere and go nowhere. They should be interconnected and flow seamlessly into each other. There is one simple way to achieve a similar effect of smoothness. For these transitions put subtitles.
Try to embed less platitudes into your text, although they cannot be avoided. Read articles of famous authors in this area.